The problem with most cover letter introductions is simple: they are boring. They tend to state the obvious. While you don’t need to create an ingenious hook, you should provide a backstory and sincerely share why you’re applying.
Use those first sentences to paint a picture of yourself as a person. Your story could come from anything that connects to your career choice. Consider your passions and interests, including how your current position impacts the organization and industry you serve. Think back on your family history, your early fascination with numbers, and your high school career. Be sure to share any special ties you have to the industry and why you’re interested in working with that company specifically.
Consider this standard introduction:
I learned of Smith Financial Firm’s career opening from a college professor, and I am very interested in securing an internship for the upcoming summer with Smith’s Summer CPA Internship Program. I am a second-year student at State Public University, with a concentration on accounting and finance.
Now consider this introductory story:
I became fascinated with Smith Financial Firm in my first accounting course. My grandfather almost lost his jewelry business due to disorganized books and a poor understanding of tax laws. Smith’s focus on helping small business owners establish a sustainable family legacy ties into my own career motivation. Since that freshman course two years ago, gaining an internship in the annual Smith Financial Summer Program has been my aim.
The second introduction conveys the same information as the first, inside a personal story. It creates a connection between your family history, career motivation, and the internship.